Reviews for An Interactive Story

[Skaijo]

*nod

As a game, it was a bit too easy. There wasn't much of a chanllenge and I'm not sure if 3-decisions in a story really embodies the full meaning of "intereactive." Still, what you did accomplish, you did exceptionally well. The animation was fluid, and there was a great sense of style. The story was simple, but it also wasn't misleading or too convoluted to follow (as with most other interactive tales). I think that this was a great flash, and should you decided to make more, all of NG would be greatly pleased. ^_^

[BlindSilence917]

Its ..aight.

Very original way to go thru a story. Gotta give u props for that. But it was kinda boring. N some sound would rly help. Rly short too..yeah..definitely needs to b longer. Like ur style thoh. Prolly won't play it again, but I'd play another one like it, if u fixed some of the problems. 7/10.

[tallerthanyou]

Coulda used more options...

I thought it was very good all around. The only problem was that there was too little options. I do think that this is a little young for the site but its still really good. Lol I liked how if you keep the wallet she turns into a wanted criminal...

[VoxTheHero]

Meh...

It was alright. Only fun part was sticking the thorn into the thing's eye.

And it's WANDERING not wondering

Wandering: To move without aim
Wondering: Contemplating over something

[Jonen]

a nice book

I like your idea, animated book.
The graphic and animation were pretty good, try add background or something. It doesn't need to be perfect, just some color to set tone, as well ass background music.

Apart from it's being too short and silent, everything is wonderful.
btw, I liked the gilr's voice says "hallo" =)