Suggestions.
The storyline was great but the way that you expressed it made the movie fall hard.
One thing that I hate to see in flash makers are bad english sentences placed in the movies. If your going to speak in english please spell out things. Using internet slang in a war scene is just wrong.
I say put more effort into it and polish it a bit more. Story is good,but content and expressing on the sotyr line is crap.
...........no
bad story, bad graphics, and if they were actors then id say bad acting, the lines they used werent too good, like i gotcha ya, pretty corny
sad truth, if i wasnt reviewing this i dont think i woulda finished watching
:-/, and use voices in more than 1 part next time you make a film
So bad it's funny
This is so bad it's hilarious...The Pink Panther theme...the instantanious newspapers...
I still blammed it though...
Regards.