well
i love the animation style. there's really not enough substance in this flash to warrant its protection, but keep going; you have promise.
Reviews for "couple crappy shorts..."
eh
it was good, but too short, and too pointless.
couple crappy is right
you need a lot more work and a shit load of time on this flash.
Shom responds:
Dear cricket_vinsey. I appreciate your input, but... seriously. When looking at other first flashes on newgrounds and comparing them to mine... I think mine turend out pretty darn good.