Meh, it would've been better if it were longer...
Honestly, I feel it ended too soon. You should've had him doing more than just stumbling while on the hallucinogenic shroom. Like, doing various stupid things or something. I don't know, what I know is, this was kinda on the short side, which in this case is a bad thing, as it blew much of the movie's potential. Maybe if you have time, you can continue the story and re-submit a longer version...? Now I'm just rambling, but think about it. I wouldn't be surprised if, like, if you were to make it longer, you really create something hilarious, you know?