nice
nice work really enjoyed it looking forward to the next episode and the music you had was great
nice
nice work really enjoyed it looking forward to the next episode and the music you had was great
sure why not
dont get mad at the score im generalizing it, pretty good it deserves to get through..
improvments
for starters you could have had a stick man in a helcopter taking pictures and him going it to the mall
erm...nice?
It wasn't horrible, but maybe faster pacing and a little more action. Good visuals though!
better then mine anyways.
that was like 1/10 as long as it should've ben -_-
WWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW, pretty good though, it just need more story line, instead of a cool intro, and 4 lines of dialog....... :/