Not bad
Not bad, could have done with a bit of work. Like for instance having enough time at the begining for someone to read what it said. If your unsure about how long to put it up then why not have a button so that when the viewer has read it he can continue. Plus you might not have noticed but I think the dot of your i and the s where on the same layer or something cos they went weird when it faded out. Keep an eye on the little things and you can improve your work greatly.