Good Potencial
You my friend, have some good potencial at your fingertips. You obviously know how to use hit tests, text scrolling, and changes in character direction. All you need now is a longer plotline. Keep gunnin', and you'll eventually get there.
Has Potential
As an experiment or preview, this is pretty good. Flesh out the characters, have an actual sotry with more than one room and you'll have yourself a pretty good game.
Meh
You have got some skill in flash, and I think you should consider making more games like this, but with more of a storyline and goal other than to make the player laugh. The text was kind of funny, but the game was too short. I liked the credits screen, that was pretty funny also.
i protected it because.......
you have so much potential with that game, it appears you know actionscript well enough you can make a really cool game, but instead you made this?funny a little maybe, wait almost ok i didn't laugh.
I actually just used a modified version of a game I'm working on. A game much better than this.
Kay well...
I gotta admit... the presentation had me going for a sec. Given my fear of the outdoors I figured it wouldn't be a reality game. xD