NOT BAD....NOT BAD AT ALL
the graphics are really good love how you did the first chick in this. Music not bad sounds like you got it out of the elevator or when you were on hold from some company. But still it is pretty good. Couldnt understand what you were trying to say though. Look like you wanted to go really deep and dark but in a light kinda way. One more thing in the bed seen with two peole was it a male female or male and male making out. Has alot of potental in your graphics. Cant wait to see what you have coming up. Maybe it could be a little longer.