mmmmmmm....
that was strange.......
mmmmmmm....
that was strange.......
lol so is strange good? lol :)
Very Very High Quality
James: This is a truly great piece of artwork. Not many like this come to the portal, and unfortunately, many that do, don't make it through the review stage. I actually felt a bit of sadness inside watching this, thinking of the pain one can cause by a little thoughtlessness. I am not entirely sure of the meaning we were supposed to get from this in general (and specifically the little yaoi scene) but I think that serves to give each viewer a chance to ponder on the meaning on this obviously personal feeling animation.
Now, Specifically:
Graphics: You have a great manga style that is represented quite well, though the arm movement portion was a little bleh...I liked it too much overall.
Style: Masterful. Simply Masterful. You were able to convey such strong feelings through the use of simplistic imagery. The colors and shapes...so perfect.
Sound: And that MUSIC! It fit so strangely, but so right.
More. We must have more!
wow, this is one excellent review. i thank you :) it summarizes it very well, I must work on animation but keep perplexing/enigmatic storylines :) arigato! *bows happily!*
And you shall have more! *huggles*
Very "cool."
This flash-ga is very "cool!" I loved watching it. In fact, I watched it three times. I didn't like the Yaoi or whavever that stuff is called though.. that wasn't really essential.. and was kinda gross. :P But I still loved the plot, music, words, animation, and art. It all fit together perfectly. I'm looking forward to your next work. Good job. Full marks.
wow thanks! :) I personally am not a fan of yaoi but there is a "secret" population of girls, mostly high schoolers who are crazy about that stuff, so in case of of them see, i wanna get some fan girls on my side lol... and homosexuality should be something we tolerate... so i guess i'm pretty open minded with my work. still, thankies! :) *hugs*
Pretty good
I liked the drawing style you used, definitely had that anime/manga flair to it. But the only thing that bothered me was the very choppy actions on screen, just add a few more frames to these things and it'll be great.
i agree, if one wants to make it in flash, one must learn to animate better. thanks for the constructiveness in your review :)
Fantastic.
You should be proud of this work, the style is phenomenal. The only problem I had... was that the music didn't seem to fit the situation. There was a feeling of despiratio n and sadness in the animation, that wasn't carried over into the music. Other than that, well done.
i agree, i was torn between so many songs... still, i chose this piece because it was from a romantic comedy called full house from Korea, and since it's a comedy, the only times when there is sad music is when it's really sad... really sad for a comedy is just not sad enough for this flash hehe. thankies cutie! :)