Reviews for My Hatred of Reality TV

[Deaminos]

What just happened?

I agree with the above post, it appears that everything seems to go so fast - I can't seem to follow the text (even though I know you told me to pause it if I really wanted to see it), You'll find the majority of people are reluctant and too lazy to do such things.

Sound quality could have used some work but the sound is better than some I have seen.

I agree that reality TV sucks but I think you could have established your point a little better.

I. Establish the Problem
II. Show the audience the problem
III. Reveal the consequences
IV. End of show

That way you have an organized chronological order of which to justify your argument (that I happen to agree with by the way) - Good luck on your future works!

Dave-Flinch-Price responds:

Thanks! I'm still starting out with this stuff so I'll take it on board.

[VVJaGeRVV]

Better than most

I completely agree with ya bud, but so do most people out of high school but not too old to wish they still had life. Thats the audience. The flash was good, slow down a bit and a bit of an improvement in sound quality would be nice. Also match the caption/flash to the actual words yoru speaking, otherwise its a bit of an annoyance. Overall good, I think I'll go look up the other two about now.

[j0nathan]

Ok, I'll bite...

It wasn't terrible. It was close. Slow down the text, improve the sound, commit to the Brit accent (or don't at all), and inject a little bit of rage. After you do those things, resubmit for higher score.

Dave-Flinch-Price responds:

Hang on a minute...I'm a brit! Thanks for the review. I'll keep it in mind.

[Vetkin]

Brilliant

Yeah someone found the right words to express my thoughts!! :p