Pretty Awesome
This was pretty great, man. Though, being the nitpicker that I am...
The backgrounds are absolutely wonderful, which on the one hand is great, but it makes your average-looking characters look a little sub-par. I also think they could have been a little better animated.
But all of that aside, the concept was awesome, I thought it was hilarious, and the voices were pretty good too. With a little more tweaking, this could be huge.
Good show. I applaud you.
aWESOME
That was awesome all those times i stayed up late and watched crappy commercials i wish that this kind of stuff came on awesome.
*thumbs up*
That was so great! Overall it flowed together with it's general randomness and subtle comedy... However it lacked the type of music you'd see on a commercial like this... maybe occasionally put in some of the good ol' elevator music?
I think that would make the commercial seem much more like a parody. Also, the one part with the old man (I think) talking in the background... it was a bit difficult to hear him without blasting up my speakers... Great job though!
Good work
Ok your jokes were mediocer to good. But the one thing yuou need to work on is the movement of the characters. When the guy falled down it doesn't look very smooth. Besides that good job.
heh
that was pretty good heh