well
it is really annoying hearing the same sounds looped over, and over, and over, and over, and OVER! please think of something new! please! OR YOU WILL END UP LIKE THE FEMALE TIGER! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! no really, new sounds please!
Reviews for "Primal War 03"
Woot
This was pretty cool. I watched the first one so I see what they were talking about. I like how you are showing different sides of the story to people. The storyline is interesting too. This is definately an animation ill be looking forward to seeing more of in the future.
Pretty Nice...
Not too bad. The sounds were cool at first but got annoying really quickly. I liked the gratuitous violence quite a bit though! And that feline woman had a nice pair if I do say so myself! Cool action too. Only problems were the sound and your grammar. Especially (one of my psycho peeves) when people say "your" instead of "you're" Odd I know. But the grammar just stuck out quite a bit. Not a major thing but something to consider in the future! Otherwise it was cool and I would like to see the next installment! :D
Wierd...
Those sounds probably damaged my ears ;P But it was an good original story ;P
7
I'm going to forgoe commenting on your sound, as its been covered beyond sufficiently. What's important is that your flashes are getting considerably better, and in such a short amount of time as well. Its obvious that you're passionate about the movies you make, and it's very nice to see how efficient you are at making them. You will eventually become a very talented flash artist, and your quick production will only work for your better.
to improve, you could spend more effort in making your animations and movements more fluid and realistic, and you should take steps to improve your writing and presentation of your stories.
work on your characters and your settings a bit more too, and you'll find that you can produce a very high quality flash that can then be fine-tuned by criticism into something of professional temper