Needs A Alternative Ending
This flash is one of the best I've seen so far but just the ending needs to go along with the rest of the flash (FLASH IS VERY SERIOUS/ ENDING JUST TAKES EASY WAY OUT BEING SILLY). I think if you could add a fight scene of the android vs. the military would be a suiting finish befor he blows up the world.
Aw man!!
Well, I gotta say the visuals were absolutely amazing, and could be in the ranks of the top flash artists. Unfortunately, the scenes were WAY to slow moving, and there was no plot whatsoever. All through the flash I was thinking "OK, so....wha'ts the point?" Then the end haappened with the no battery thing and that just turned it all to shit. I was very dissapointed that you did that. Also, the sound editing wasn't that good -- the song changed too abruptly. But other than the lack of plot, you have amazing potential with those flash art abilities. Most flash artist would kill to be able to draw like that.
Dude could have been so much better
Let me start off by saying that it was a decent flash, dont get me wrong. But WTF man ??? Battery dead, that was so lame. You couldn't have done anything stupider then that. So much potential gone right down the pisser. Next time you make a flash make it interesting
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i like how you put akira toriyama as music, hes the guy who made dragon ball z(obviously youre a fan cause your style is almost exactly the same). i dont think toriyama had anything to do with the music and this was so boring i watched bout a min before i said queer and turned it off.>yawn<
no dude, just... no
Wow. That had some great Graphics, had a great starting 30 seconds, and had the potential to be one of the true greats. God knows i was on the edge of my seat. Then you screwed it to hell. The sequences were to long, even for the joke. The joke was crummy and didnt really match the depth of the Graphics. And the music sucked ass, to much for the way it was made. The truth is some of the most kick ass movies dont have half the graphic...ness yours does but the story, pace, music and effects make up for that. Anyway thanks for practicing before putting it out on the web. So many people just put shit out there. Good job though.