hi...
since this is your first flash video i'll go easy on you. the graphics and the heartbeats to add suspense are pretty great BUT could use some music and voices for the characters. if you can't do it like somewhat comic book like. you could put some better elements in the video to make it funnier and SEEM more interactive. like i said, i'll go easy on you since this IS your first flash video. overall pretty good for a first.