Well
The rewiew before this one is unoriginal and copies every whiny review ever written. Let the flash stand on it's own reguardless of any similarity to crappy hollywood films.
Overall it's decent, Voices/sound better than average. Try giving a more 3rd person perspective to show the entire area. Experiment with shading, and review gun design. As per Kringle's stuff, the weapons can be made to look great with fine, minimalist lines. Anyway good job and keep it up.