Nice
I even lol'ed once
xD
Reviews for "Ninjitsu RP Ep. 1"
Its ok............
Let them talk it is hard to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Biz atch!!!
mildy clever
Nice work, it looks very good. I thought that the dragon flying across the screen was very clever.
Promising.
The mouths could be a liiil bit more believeable. Humor was well placed, but I feel you could push it just a bit more. The repetitiveness of the jokes worked for this one, but just make sure not to repeat them into other episodes- make it fresh each time. Tweening was excellent- your characters moved fluidly. Remember not to clash too much between character styles, in such case with the ending and how different the monster looked from the two main characters, it was a bit offputting. Note that your audience falls in love with the first thing it sees, so carry that consistancy through.
Voice acting was decent, but keep away from the fuzzes.
The series looks promising. I hope to see more from you :)
Big lol
Man this was one funny animtion, too bad it wasnt longer.