Pretty good! I see why they enjoyed it!
Nicely done man, i had lots of fun while wacthing this, and after watching this it is easy to see why the people you showed in your school enjoyed it. The whole thing was pretty amusing, even if in a particular spot there wasnt any humour. Everything about this was fairly well done at least, and it left nothing out that i wanted to see. You have only made one another flash that you ended up submitting to the site, so after seeing this i say make more and continue submitting your movies here. Anyways here is my review.
The graphics were pretty good throughout the movie. Your characters were pretty memorable, and the actual drawings of them were good too. The detail in everything was very good too, you had enough to make everything work nicely in the movie. The colours while simple, did their job pretty well. And the animation was generally pretty good, however this is probably the one thing id try to improve on when you next submit something. The lipsync was a bit awkward at times, and the animation was a little "rough" perhaps on occasion. The style was great too, you took a simple idea and made it into a movie with some humour and a good length to it. I enjoyed the idea actually, it is pretty creative and the presentation that went along with it helped it out even more. I liked your characters, especially the big bouncer, though im not entirely sure why. The child also made me chuckle once or twice. Maybe you could improve on the last part of this movie, because i didnt fully understand what was going on, or really why it was in the movie. The sound was great too, i enjoyed the voice acting and the sound effects that you had. The sound didnt really amaze me or anything, but it did help out the movie in a positive manner so good work here too.
Overall this was a great movie, worthy of the good score it has, or maybe even better. It is easy to see how anyone can enjoy this, because i myself enjoyed almost everything about it. So great work and please continue submitting stuff to this site. We can never use enough great authors!
~Two Thumbs Up! 4/5