Pretty good
I like the idea of frankenstine style movie with a twist. the voice you had for the trailer was hard to understand at times and i personaly didnt like it,(kind of turned me off from the whole thing a bit) it looks like it will be a good flash when its done.
Needs subtitles.
Clearly very overrated, this didn't have the quality I'm used to see in daily 1st's. But it was an above-average effort.
One helpful tip: add subtitles. It really helps a lot.
I hope you're going to finish this project, as people are anticipating it a lot. Don't be another Rob DenBleyker, who just puts intros and trailers out, without actually finishing anything.
Pretty Good
All in all it was pretty good, but the story sounds WAY to much like LOTR.... listen to the lyrics. Sub "The Book" for "The Ring" Other than that it was good.
Looks great but I have some holes to point out
Although the feel of this series is absolutely stellar I wonder how you would have a "scientist" 2000 years ago.Wouldn't they have been alchemists or at least wise men or something?Just a semantic but you should word it right I think.
Next, how would the guy who finds the book know to read what would surely be ancient aramaic or some other archaic and forgotten language.I would of course accept that he's a reincarnation of the "scientist" in question but make sure and cover that base.
And now my final grievance...The syringe in the end of the trailer.Looks suspiciously like the stuff in "Reanimator" that was used to render the dearly departed ambulatory again.Would a body snatcher of 2000 years ago have had a syringe even remotely similar to the one shown?I'm no archeologist but I tend to think he wouldn't.
Besides the, the narrators voice is cool and fits well.Your style of drawing where everything seems rusty and worn is great.I can't wait to see this series start in earnest.
Thanks for giving my flash a constructive review sir.
About the scientist, yeah maybe I should have used Alchemist.
About the book, it is not directly told because viewers have to guess stuff... It just leave you with questions, and you have to guess. You're right tho about the reincarnation thing.
And the syringue, the syringue you see is modern. Because it is used in the present day. The guy only found the book, not all the stuff he needed to execute the thing. He didn't took a syringue from the past lol
Thanks again.
eum...
feels pretty much like Evil Dead and Re-animator mixed together, the movies are better than this tho, thought Dead Stench 1 was better