it was okay
The Mr. Reynolds remind'd me of like..one of those fifties narrator voice who explains sex and shit while theres a boy who acts it out....but more twist'd he was. And Johnny remind'd me of Butters from southpark. It was okay, i like the style, but seems like near the end it was rather pointless and somewat a prolong'd ending.
Um
You're the cutest girl I've ever seen in my life,
But it's over now, and with my knife!
Di-Diane, Di-Diane, Di-Diane, Diiiii-ane!
Di-Diane, Di-Diane, Di-Diane, Diiiii-ane!
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Er, yeah. Anyway, it was okay... but seemed to lack, um, direction. Why did that guy suddenly turn from a pedophile into some kind of drug dealer? Why was that weed acting like acid, and that acoustic guitar like an electric? The humour was also... not all that funny. Like, the buns joke. It was stupid in the first place, and the timing and delivery wasn't good either.
Also, you really need to fix the volumes for sounds. I found myself needing to change the volume from really high to really low, several times, and at a couple of points needing both simultaneously for different things.
So, yeah, animation was good, humour could have been better, story could have been... clearer, sound needed tweaking.
um...yeah...
'Well your mom's a BITCH.' Hah. That was good. Trippy, maybe, and rampantly, overtly homosexual, but it was just what I needed at 1:00 in the morning. Random stupidity.
Good animation...
but that was pretty much the only thing that i liked about it... sorry man, but i didnt find the jokes funny at all, and the sound was so poor, that i missed alot of the lines. really sweet drawings man.
Dragged on for a little longer than it should...
You kinda made this idea to people that this Mr. Reynold was like some pedophile but turns out he's a druggy who plays an acoustic guitar that sounds like an electric guitar. I didn't actually see the story in this at all. Don't get me wrong, it was good but there was little plot and I hope you develop it in the second episode.
What can I say, pilots are hard to make. The second episode I truly think is A LOT better. Im giving Johnny some friends to hang out with. As for the guitar... that was kind of the joke. A bad one I guess.