Reviews for Ness Goes to the Arcade

[Major-punk]

An alright sprite animation

The backgrounds looked nice and detailed and as Ness walked it kinda looked realistic, err as realistic as it's can ever get.

The storyline seemed to be a little lacking though, like it seemed things were happening for no reason and without adding to the story.

The one part I got a little chuckle from was where the monty python foot 'pancaked' Ness, it was pretty funny but other then that it was a little dull. I have never played any of Ness's games (other then SSB) so maybe it was a bit of a parody but I dunno.

Overall I thought it was an ok flash but with maybe a little more time planning ahead of time I think this could be much better.

FattyWhale responds:

Thanks for the review. I'll admit this could use some work, and at the end I kind of lost interest in making this movie so that is why I just ended it so abrubtly.

[katryania]

Not a bad start

I liked your idea of using ness for a flash- you did well with the background images, and the music- though low quality- was accurate for the scene.

The problem was your lack of plot =P Ness wants to go to the arcade.. falls, passes out, and... is squashed by a giant foot.... WTF?

You need to make an actual plot, with other characters for ness to interact with, and make the flash longer.

Not a bad idea, but you need to actually take it somewhere next time.
GL!

FattyWhale responds:

Yeah, my mind was kind of running when I made this.

[RadishGlock]

Yes, i get it :(

Oh no, oh deary me this won't do at all. You see, my great Aunt Radisha fell off a cliff on the way to the local arcade and died of cancer a few months later so i find this really offensive. I think you should try again but please think of all the people you could offend in this Flash. It is more than a sprite animation tweening about: it is a symbol of loved ones that have died a tragic death. Please, keep trying, you can only improve. But try and leave out all the hidden messages from now. This made me very upset. I can only hope i can support my family emotionally over the next few nights through these depressing times.

FattyWhale responds:

thanks for the good story, this was a great review :D

[RyanKajito]

It could be a lot better.

At first it seemed like it was going to be really good. Then, it started going down hill. The random part at the end where he gets squished by a foot didn't seem funny to me. His walking went pretty smoothly. I think that it was pretty funny how he was climbing down the cliff and fell. I thought he was going to continue getting hurt on his way to the arcade. But no, that's not what happened. I think that you could have done a lot better and put an actual good story line to it.

FattyWhale responds:

Like I said, I did this on a whim so didn't really plan anything out. I'm working on some projects though, so maybe you will see something improved in the future.

[888poke]

It had promise, I'll give you that

But...
*shakes head*
i've seen better, try more characters and a longer story.

FattyWhale responds:

well ok.