Better graphics than 'flow'.
While beautifully animated, this Flash film fell short of its (enormous) potential for greatness in a key way; it was an action film with clumsy, almost stop-motion-like action. The scene with the most latent potential for brilliance was simply blacked out with quick splatters across the screen. I can appreciate the concept of using the audience's imagination as an extension of a scene - or even in lieu of one - but in this case it was no excuse. Animators are suppossed to display creativity, not come begging to their audience for it. In general, this was a decent short, but one with a great deal of room for improvement.