Well, Erm....Yes
That was, I must say, one of the most boring flash movies related to MGS that I have ever seen.
Poor dialogue, subpar voice acting and the animation was slightly less than average.
"He only shows up when his brother's in the vicinity" lol
Well, thanks for wasting my time.
MGS with low MSG
Enjoyed the atmosphere. Didn't like the dialogue, thought it tried to hard and ended up sounding really unrealistic (not the voice acting, what was said). Pleas bring it down a few notches for part two. ;)
Flash Problems
You wrote a better story than the guys who are #1 and #2, albeit unoriginal in it's design. However, the problem with your flash is mainly on style and sound. You jump from CG to flash and it does not help with the sound.
I don't like your toggle screen in the beginning. It looks convoluted, it's not simple, and difficult to discern. People don't read sideways.
Although you had a good introduction, there was no change that led to the action of the story. It was empty, as a whole bunch of rain drops just ended this movie. I'm left with nothing. Does rain want me to watch more...I doubt it.
Like the top two ranked flashes for the day, you need to critique your own work. Make sure that the story is in complete chapters and the style and sound do not clash. Your intro was very crappy and not well thought of. There's breaking within every 3 seconds as you speak. Practice, heck read off of written texts. You're not robots, and the intro does not have the intention of sounding robotic.
I think you got some work, but you have a good premise and on the right track. Go back to the drawing board and fix those kinks. I wouldn't consider today as a success. The top two had the same exact problems as well.
Im sorry.
The sound quality sucks, I'm sorry. There are too many gaps between dialogue, where NOTHING HAPPENS, and there is a general graininess over most of the voices, not just the radio voices. There are many garish outlines around the objects, and I'm not talking about the purposeful ones in the name of style. Also, I don't mean to sound racist, but maybe you should commission a few white actors to play the main parts for this one. With all the general flaws in this production, I'm afraid that this is not the answer we are looking for. Do us all a favor and either clean up your act real nicely for the sequels, or DON'T EVEN BOTHER.
Wow check the grilling im getting lol The sound gaps is because either your comp sucks or you've got other animations goin. Dmac did an awsome job and was the only one who offered to do it. Were you looking for this as an answer anyway? Not sure anyone was...
Hope the next 2 will improve
Its actually very confusing. One moment we see the plane, the next we see Ocelot. The thing that "snake" and "Otacon" (Otacon is voiced much better than snake by the way) makes little to no sense. It looks good but very gray dark and blurry, why is that. Hope the next 2 will be improve in these areas.