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Shit man this shit is dope! You get a break and I can see you goin far, dawg.
Keep it up.
Ratingss
I'll Watch This Space.
Only Thing Is (and I bet you're tired of hearing this) The Autotune.
You Pulled It Off And I Give You Mad Props, But You Were On A Thin Line Between I Sounding Amazing And Distorted.
Still, Ratings.
--Peace
good lookin thanks alot
Goosebumps!
Autotune is a litte too much, but the lyrics gave me goosebumps!
thanks bro! ya i need a producer cuz im just makin shit on my 2004 computer. i could see this song bein perfect if i could get into a studio
that intro...
intro gives me the goosebumps, although it would have more of an effect if "Daddy, where's mommy" was only said once, and then you used a delay or something on it. Still, it effectively sets the mood for this.
Flow is great. As for the autotune, I think there's only 1 or 2 spots where a little less of it would have been nice, but, for the most part, you rocked this shit man.
Well done
good look mane, thats my 6 yr old in the beginning actually
Soo amazing
This was freaking amazing..the lyrics are beast. i agree with krunkerman though the voices are too altered
Needs polishing
This is very good, but the 1st verse could be a lot better, and the voice sounds kind of like you have a cold while singing. But what I think is great about it is that the lyrics and the story the song tells is very raw and emotionally powerful. It isn't bad by any means, but I think it could be a lot better if it was polished up a bit.
i agree 100% i was goona redo it and put it on newgrounbds but it got voted top overal song. i was like damn.. maybe its fine how it is.. but im a big critic when it comes to my own music. i can make this song better and i will.. thanks for review