Wow...
I was just playing some Korean online game with the background music being played with similar beats and instrumentals.
It's lucky to find such a ethical rhythm. Also, it sounds like it came from the East, not from the West. Preferably, the Lost Temples.
Keep it up! This truly deserves an incentive to be played to large audiences.
Oh, and (in my opinion) please use a bit more of the choir (deep, low Oohs and female Oohs). It will balance out the middle and will bring the whole song to the highest climax.