Ok...
But it gets corny at points.... O.o
Ok...
But it gets corny at points.... O.o
Dialogue and grammar was terrible in this flash
This flash was a very good RPG and had a great story, but it could have been better if you had used correct grammar and kept the dialoge more clear, if their is some way you could edit the text and resubmit it, it would be greatly improved.
still
u still gotta improve ur sprites they ar fucked up
Great! (But Grammar Sucks!)
I really like the storyline as it's quite interesting and the music was well chosen. But it was a little hard to understand what was being said as the grammar is really bad. The graphics were alright, although I think they could be improved a little. Yet overall, good job!
better than the other ones but......
there was still work to be doe graphicly and you might wanna smooth the transition out a little more to make it look more fluent rather than those akward stnd stills after they are done talking