Reviews for Violin Flight (WIP) ~P~

[ac371]

Very good

The melody is great but lacks variety a bit. You don't have too change it, you can simply let the other instruments play it because the addition of the choir & strings isn't enough. You can also experiment with hum how to call it? 'Powah of teh song'. I mean one part can be played gently let say on piano and the other with powerful orchestral hits and brass sounds etc. You know what I mean. Nevertheless it has a lot of potential and your other songs are great that's why I'm giving you 5/5 & 10/10

[AircraftCarrier]

Awww...

Don't you think that those staccato-accents are too short? It's like spike traps in a game *false hint* It makes the song...um, lacking vocab... stuttering. But others are fine, luckily

[Alvama]

nice1

a nice piece of music
and with "a menu or maybe background", do u mean it will be in the soundtrack of epic battle 3? just checking XD

[ChairYeoman]

5x6

As a (amateur) violinist, this song makes me wince. The idea of playing something this fast and then still having perfect intonation on those accents (which btw, are a sign of a very young (like Mozart or Mendelssohn) composer, but I'm not one to talk, being 16) is scaring me. That being said, this was probably on a synth, so I won't berate you too much. On the other hand, you DO want to avoid this.

It also seems that its supposed to be a building song, but it goes back to the tonic at random times. I understand that this may seem necessary in a loop, but have you considered a Shepard scale-esque loop?

I usually give points where my vote is based on what a lay would think, but my review score is based on how good you are from a musical standpoint. This explains the 5x6; its good if you know nothing about music but it can use a lot of improvement.

Good luck!

Phyrnna responds:

Thank you for the review. However there are a few things that I would like to correct.

This pieces is -impossible- to play on one violin. Certainly it may be hard to tell/distinguish, however this is a piece that would be played by -two- violins. Unless it is possible to bridge two notes that are an octave apart. I wouldn't avoid it personally, because I think it sounds really nice as it is. I would recommend that a solo violinist avoid it, it would probably hurt their hand.

It's not necessarily a building song. It's really just a loop. A four chord loop that is repeated. And honestly there wasn't much else that I would add onto it. It may sound incomplete as it is, but the incompleteness is what that drives it on. In addition, this is also a loop excerpt from a bigger song.

Thanks anyways for the review, I appreciate it. ^__^

[DJ-Delinquent]

0 points for lazyness

this is got to be the biggest spoiler ever

shame on u