I really liked one part of it.
I liked the part where the clay figure was making a claymation production of his own, I think that has alot of potential to parody the art form or even document it well, either way its a concept with alot of potential.
Over all the movie was a bit boring though, the main polt was lacking and the voice overs blew. The sound quality was bad, the voices were bad and the dialouge was bad.
All this being said, I think that this film is a good place to work from, you obviously understand how the whole production process works, I think its just a matter os sharpening the saw.