meh
It was good, I like thos kind of flashes, you did a great work, but it wasn't funny it was just pleasent to watch si it wasn't a waste of my time, I liked it thanks man.
International man
Reviews for "Orlando's Joint #3"
Pretty good
Didn't understand a few things, but I guess that's because it's 3rd in a series.
Anyway it was pretty good :)
HAHA
cool man, i'm loving this series now, well good man,
Peace
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Well, I laughed, so props for that.
++++ Made me laugh! I wasn't expecting that. I chortled at the concept of Bumpy coming back as he did and I faintly chuckled at the end.
-- Kinda slow/predictable in places. The phone gag has been done too many times before.
-- I really don't like the straight-lined buildings in the background. Maybe if you deleted all the lines, or didn't use the line tool to draw them I'd prefer it.
++ I kinda like the scene at the start, where he's questioning why Bumpy would leave him the joint.
-- The characters still feel a bit flat though. I feel as if they should be questioning stuff, like the death, more than they do. Actually, that's maybe my biggest quibble re: character behaviour.
overall
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Well, I laughed, so props for that. But some other areas of the writing seemed not so good.
This wasn't that good. I admit the idea of him as a cockroach is pretty funny. It's reincarnation, right? I didn't know he was a Hindu. The voice is pretty funny. This is still kind of dull.
It just doesn't have anything that interesting in it. Well, I've never heard of a cockroach reincarnation before. I guess "joint" has a double meaning here. It was just nothing noteworthy. It's at least okay.