There's even a little minigame!
There's a lot of cool stuff done here.
I'm...
I'm not even going to go over all the things you did well. There's a lot.
(The fact that you included a mini-game and an alternate ending is cool as hell)
There's only one thing I'd like to see in your next one, and that's the pointing. The dude's arms look a little weird while he's doing it, but other than that, great job. ^^