well first off...
you need to smoothe out your animation alot. its a little too simplistic for your characters. that and your timing was off on alot of frames. its like watching one of those kung fu movies where everyone stops talking and their mouths are still moving. so work on coordination and advancing some animation techniques and you'll be set
That wasn't bad!
It's even pretty good since it's your first flash movie here (I don't know if you tried to submit some before that were blammed but I think this will pass).
Lipsync was horribly wrong and the animation was kinda basic but it really shows you've got potential and you can actually draw better stuff than stickmen so it's a really good point for you. Character's design were original too.
I hope to see more stuff from you, I'm sure you'll improve! :)
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that was ok. not incredibally funny, you maybyt could have spent more time writing it (why was mark even there)
Nice
It was funny, i liked it :)
Visual style was good, with the exception of everything looking like it was done in mspaint.Then again, that may be what you were going for, ima not sure :P
Sound, good- but they de synced with the action quite a bit, and this is a fast PC.
Broken Down:
Win: Funny +3
Win: Style +2
Win: Story +1
Fail: Mspaint GFX -.5
Fail: Desynching sound -.5
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This made little sense. If you make another, try and make it worth watching.