I actually like emo kids
but that doesn't automatically deduct your score. I think the graphic is fine and you show certain skills.
The reason why I don't like this movie is that it is rather pointless. Although I like emo kids, humorous mockery can be very good. But this is not. Including emo kids, there are people who want to kill themselves but never do. If that really annoys you I think you should show how it can be annoying in the movie. This one just looks like the guy with the gun is too nosy.