very simple
This seems to display a simple idea of can i have your life I'm guessing in which case he cant. D: It's wonderful he wants to kill people or something but that is just messed up. Also he can't really have anything but riches in sand, poor little dude, hope he can survive off of it anyways. Hhaha.
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haha, the stories you come up with are funny. thanks for the review.
Best one so far
Wow, a picture where I like all sides equally. ;)
I think the face is drawn very good, whereas the body still needs some work. The scenery is quite nice, but I like Fro's idea of having a few waves in the sky because of it being in a desert where it's usually pretty hot.
But I like how the colors go along pretty well together in this picture.
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how do you know? have you ever been in a real desert before? you've probably only been in one of those fake deserts that you see in car commercials where the car is doing donuts and shit and kicking up dust. I was trying to draw one of those real deserts where you can tell the difference between right and wrong, and there are never waves in the sky, and you can't even tell how hot it is. thanks for the review.
Simple
The colors you picked fit a scene in the desert very well. The man's expression matches his question and the overall tone.
I don't think you should have made his facial hair transparent the way you did, it seems a bit weird. But then again, this piece is exactly that, so it's not much of a problem.
One other thing would be the sky. Instead of bars, have the horizon blend together.
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thanks for the review.
Decent
This was decent but could still use some more effort but this was an artistic style and really showed some effort and I really like what you did with the backround very nice then main character all color that was a plus so all in all this was ok but could have been better but overall was notbad and showed some artistic style here
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Nice but could use more effort throughout
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Perhaps I don't understand?
I think the colors that you used in the sky were too straight. Especially if it's in a desert where there is a lot of heat waves and things off in the distance are going too look wavy/distorted a little more. I also think that the change of color in the sky should have been more subtle. It just goes from one color right to another color without any blending. Just really doesn't look good in my opinion.
The things that I did like in the picture were the ground, mountains, and sun though. They seemed to be down much better and I really liked the color that you used in them. I do admit though that the yellow color in the sky kind of clashes with the yellow color in the sun. This brings up another problem that I have with the sky though. Perhaps I'm wrong, but shouldn't the order be yellow, orange, and red? Having the lighter color in between the darker colors just seemed weird and out of place.
I don't mind that you have words there for us to read, but do think about not including words sometimes so people can't think of what it means to them without the bias of any extra information in piece of art. I also would have liked the words out of a text box. The words seem cartoonish and the text box seems too straight and professional to match with the words. Perhaps if the box was more cartoonish itself also. (Did I just make up the word cartoonish? Firefox says I did)
I almost like the simple black and white character that you used, but I think you should have made the body as detailed as you did the head. Also, the shadow almost looks like a part of his body instead of a shadow. Perhaps a different shade of black or gray could have been used for that or you could have used just a bit more thickness since shadows do tend to be a bit thicker than the body every now and then. I also find it kind of funny that the glasses don't go behind his ears and just kind of sit on the side of his face.
I do see some sort of story here though. A man, who is lost in the desert still has the etiquette and civility to ask if he could take someone else stuff for them so they don't have to. At least that's how I interpreted this piece of art. The man has a very kind/gentle face too.
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