Review time!
First off, let me congratulate you on making second on the best of the week, although, I know not how, you still did. So good job. Now then, without further ado let us begin the review.
All I can say is that this is very unique old 20th century style. You really don't hear this to much today. However, I would not have just posted a sample, I would have waited to work on it, then post the entire work.
Now then, to the flaws. Unfortunately, this is very uncreative, repetative, short, weak, and kind of annoying. You too a loop from another song, which means that you aren't using too much creativity. While I know it is a loop, you could at least add your own touch to it and created a demo for whats to come or something. Really I don't think that this is legal in a sense and maybe you should reconsider and find something else to work on.
Despite all of this, I hope to see the finished product on the top of the week. Keep up the work and I will hopefully see more of your work. Peace,
PO