Reviews for phunky fresh WIP

[Helth]

Loops here, loops there

It's fine when you use them in small portions, but to use them like this? Dude that makes no sense to me, and some thing that is kinda anoying, is when stuff like this get top 5. I mean, is this really the best from Newgrounds of the week?

In this case i must say no. I've listened to your other stuff, and when i listen to this it's like.. Omg, this song must be stolen or something.. I mean u made a really bad intro, and then it builds up to a good song. WTF? How can u master it SOOO bad while u make so good progressions and melodies?

Ergo;
Loops :P it could be from Garageband or something

Helth
Rather dissapointed, maybe i was to hard to you too, but now u know what i think.. Oh the loop doesnt loop btw.. only when the loops enter..

Lmao NG nowdays

2/5

Kalapsia responds:

read the description, it's not my fault that this got top 5. more like* NG community nowadays. I put this under loop because its not a full song and it's closer to a loop. I just post random clips here and there, i don't actually take the time to finish anything besides a slect few things. come to think of it i've only finished two songs ever.

i also forgot to say.... read the description

[billyburf]

fantastic!

absolutely fantastic...to bad its so repetive... but this kind of old school house is the best music there is. what if you work a bit with paraQ and filtering? makes it much better, and it mosyt deffenetly needs a break

billyB

Kalapsia responds:

I actually did put some EQ automations in this small clip

[MARIO-DELTA]

um... interesant idea

is a good work i like it but it's very sample

Kalapsia responds:

it's a work in progress not a whole song, so yeah i guess this is very "sample."

[PessimistOwl]

Review time!

First off, let me congratulate you on making second on the best of the week, although, I know not how, you still did. So good job. Now then, without further ado let us begin the review.

All I can say is that this is very unique old 20th century style. You really don't hear this to much today. However, I would not have just posted a sample, I would have waited to work on it, then post the entire work.
Now then, to the flaws. Unfortunately, this is very uncreative, repetative, short, weak, and kind of annoying. You too a loop from another song, which means that you aren't using too much creativity. While I know it is a loop, you could at least add your own touch to it and created a demo for whats to come or something. Really I don't think that this is legal in a sense and maybe you should reconsider and find something else to work on.

Despite all of this, I hope to see the finished product on the top of the week. Keep up the work and I will hopefully see more of your work. Peace,
PO

Kalapsia responds:

Well I usually submit random clips just like this one. I can send in whatever I want to and it's not my fault this made it to the top 5. You could have zeroed it. Also I did add my own touch to it, I added my own drums and bass guitar. the sample was completely tweaked. I didn't just rip off some sample and just put drums over it. I don't care to make demos or anything because I don't take this site seriously due to people like you. This is COMPLETELY legal, it's under the creative common rights. I'm not selling this WIp nor do I plan to. Next time think about writing a constructive review and actually read the description. From the last paragraph of your review you seem to know that this is only a small clip. Thanks for the non helpful review.

[3manu97]

WOW

KEEP IT UP!

Kalapsia responds:

thanks, i will try