It was pretty good..
But during the long song.. you should of had like a little tv at the bottom showing the show Monkeys In Space.. that would be a bit funnier, other than that it was pretty good
Reviews for "Monkeys In Space"
Had some good qualities
Nice articulation and use of color (big points for style on the backgrounds). Cleaner lines and professional voicework would just about take this to broadcast level. The pacing was a little rough, but not inexcusable.
nice
I like your humor style, the script was good. Apart from the slow progression and such it was enjoyable. What I would suggest though is getting some other people to do voices in addition to yourself, so it doesn't just sound like you + other versions of you. Then it would REALLY kill!
I really like how you animated the mouths, and some of the arm movements. The mouths were just so smooth in movement, I really admire you for that. However you may want to make their heads move some more - usually in conversation there are certain syllables and such that have emphasis where people will jerk their heads this way and that - it would really top off the organic style of the toon.
Overall nice job - I look forward to seeing more of you work!
prostitutes....
real good dialogue... I bet that is how most shitty tv shows on the air now have been created. the animation and art style matched the dialogue very well... the credits were cool (almost too funny for the 'toon). Keep making more!
BA NAN NA S
You get special points for the inclusion of businessman thought patterns and Dropkick Murphys.