It had a little animation.
It's nice to see these pointless collabs at least starting to draw some of their own graphics. I also detect a hint of quality to the humor. Needs more animation and longer to be of any real interest, but that would require actual work. I'm not sure that's the direction you wish to head. Also the stories are too short, if you can call them stories. If doing a long story is too much effort for you. Perhapse a single story split among the collaboraters.