wasn't too bad
Could of been longer ,the sound was alittle muddy but not terrible.
I liked the original drawing, and the guy puking with the chainsaw made me laugh , all I could think was "I don't care about my shoes puuuuukke. "
Keep it up you've got talent.
yeah listen to that last guy...
...he really knows what hes talking about. i think you've got talent, escpecialy in the humor department, but i agree that the graphics could have been better. and talk about random! lmao i dont remember more than half of it but i know i got a good laugh!
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The animation killed it, you really had a winner humour wise, but the bad animation and the abrupt ending really killed it, don't get discouraged if it gets blammed, but heres a few tips for your future animations;
Don't use the default settings for the radial tool to make blood effects, if you must use the radial tool, then mix your own colours.
Spend more time on your characters, make sure they have detail and shading, even if they're supposed to look poorly drawn, you have to put some subtle detail into them.
Use better backgrounds
If you're using the paint tool for shapes like the shit around the one guys face, then outline the shape with a slightly darker shade of that colour, using a thin outline.
Don't make abrupt endings like that, it makes it look like you didn't finish the cartoon.
I agree with everything you say. To be quite honest, I didn't spend a lot of time on it. The two things I put on newgrounds so far are not the greatest, but thats only because I only made these for fun. Right now, I'm investing my time in a much better cartoon. I mainly made this and the other one to relieve stress. (I'm working on a Christmas cartoon to show at a family gathering.) The animation backgrounds and everything else are much better in that, but I export them to avi's so the file size is way to big to post here.
You just scraped a pass
The animation and the looks were... barable, the thing that really saved it was the humor, admittedly I wasn't laughing all the way through but there was enough there to keep me interested which is why I didn't outright blam you n_n
Pr3tty g00d!
lol, the animation was very simple. Could use some shading and details, especially the backgrounds ... but it was also really funny and not too short either. Keep up the great work!
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