not bad
You have a pretty good sence of telling a story a nd animating it. I think that it was a stick toon brought it down. I think you could have gotten a 3.5 if it had been regularly animated.
Keep em coming. Sound was a little hard to hear. The music. The dialoge was okay. Get some friends to do the other voices so there is better texture in the voices. I can tell they all were you. =p