wrong
the end was jast wrong
Reviews for "A sprite xmas party story"
kewl
kewlst thang tomero
blankflashist responds:
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Less than impressive
I can see that your intentions were good, but there was little worth watching in this. The grammar and punctuation were atrocious, the plot and humor were childish, and nothing about it succeeded in catching interest. I'll admit, I was expecting something along the lines of 8-Bit Theater when I clicked it, so my standards were a bit high, but this was really just boring.
wtf?
this is NOT frontpage worthy. i request it be removed immediately.
from the choppy motion, the sparce use of sound effects, to the difficult to read text boxes i say;
WHAT THE FUCK, TOM, WHAT THE FUCK?
Ish, alright but not too good
I know you can do better if you put your mind to it. Some of the errors i noticed were: there was bad grammar, the fight scene was kinda sloppilly done, and the story made little to no sense, there were some good jokes but on the whole it wasn't that impressive. Try a bit harder next time