hysterical
it's funny 'cause halo sucks.
Reviews for "Biography: Master Chief"
so-so
i had mixed feelings about this. on one
hand, some of the jokes were actually
amusing and genuinely funny; yet at
times, it felt like it was trying way to
hard to. so much it was somewhat painful,
because otherwise, this was a rather good
recreation of the story. visuals were lackluster
and the voicework mediocre, but overall it wasnt
too shabby.
score: ***
MJ
i thought it was good
watched it, liked it. Not a abd job at all, made me laugh a few times like with the arbiter bit, the halo2 bit near the end and that bith with the choosing the pillar of autumn, yeah some funny shit right there
It wasn't bad
it just wasn't good either. If you added something that was funny in there I might have stuck around but most of it is just very stupid mediocre jokes. Before you start animating show some to your friends and people you don't know. It had something there, but you missed it by a little bit.
I didn't even manage to get through.
There was no one feature about your work that made viewing this so difficult. Still, the mediocre art work, repeat of a well known story, sub-par humor, poor speech, and normal-person-off-the-street voice acting, all put together in a movie that went on for too long? I really tried to watch the whole thing. I did.
Art- Decent stuff, but nothing amazing. At least it didn't really take away from the experience, though I will say you could have spent more time on the soldiers and standard humans. They brought down the visuals the most. Animation was suitable, but unimpressive.
Story- You just went through Halo in a cut and dry manner, throwing in a joke for each scene no matter how good it was. Try to make jokes we'll all relate to. Playing Halo is an almost universal experience, and there is humor all over it, from killing a friend in coop to the hilarious sounds an elite makes when you tag him with a plasma. Your humor was just so basic, obvious, and unrelated. If you were going for Halo humor, you should have done more than just Master Chief blowing up a bird, or a wall (as a baby) or a guy ~randomly~ jumping into the water. Those things just didn't work. The only part I chuckled at was the "Fall of Reach"
Voice acting- It certainly wasn't the reason I closed out the window early, but it really didn't keep me around. Sharpen your delivery on lines (Welcome to Com...Uhh....Halo! HaaaA? Didn't do a thing for me.)
Overall, you are at a good start. You can animate, draw, and your sound quality was good. Advance in your comedic story telling and tighten up all of your work. Less is more, also, so keep it short!