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Reviews for "Pancakes"

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the graphics are cool, but the story is very short.

I like it :D.

UnknownBG responds:

thank you^^

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Well the animation was good but the movie was to damn short... better luck next time.

UnknownBG responds:

I'll try harder next time.
Thanks for the review!

could be better

well it cud have been longer and mabye had atleast some meaning to it also....Whys it called pancakes when its a pie and not a pancake

UnknownBG responds:

because i wanted to call it for pancakes

((( OK )))

~~REVIEW~~
Well that was abit short, i mean really short, also lacked in "BACKROUNDS" the gry backing was just abit plain, the "CHARACTERS" were really good though, and you also might want to add some color for extra quality to it...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some color, some backrounds and make it longer then 4 seconds...

~~OVERALL~~
A very short almost black and white toon needs some improving...

~X~

bad

this was way too short but I do like pancakes, what was with the pie thing? I don't get it? I like pie but..