Its okay
Needs to be taken of the portal its a unfinish flash.
Reviews for "Intro for something..."
good intro
good intro, just make those guys at the beging put two hands on the swords because no one can carry that mutch weight in one hand
erMaikel responds:
yeah, i know, but its an fantasy-fiction flash... if cloud could, why my guys can't? lol
... Potential...
I could see what you were going for... but previews of things don't usually last long unless they're really good. I didn't quite understand what those sparkly things in the tree were either. If you staggered your animation of the knight guys, it would look a lot better - making them all moving the same animation at the same time just kinda looks lazy and cheap. And you'd get a better sense of foreboding if it wasn't such a bright, sunny day. Make it little overcast, darken the skies. The choice of music didn't really sit well with me, but that's just me. The little openning legend was a little difficult to read because of the font and the motion going on on the screen as well... but other than that, keep at it, you'll make something outta it.
erMaikel responds:
yeah, i know the flash isnt enough good, but the history at the beggining doesnt matter: these is only a crap-history that I'll change when i finish the flash ;)
cool
I think that this is a really promising flash, I really liked the knights and how they were drawn, I voted 5 because I would like this to stay alive and I want to see more of your work.
LEAF was nice
but without the music this would b a turd.
I think u should make..
My Review.. (in progress)