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it WAS better that the first, but again, no real story, everyone looks the same, the camera is too close, its too short, and shouldnt the other ppl notice when the green helmet guy had his hand on their sholder? one good thing you did tho was set up a main character with no text or dialogue or crap like that. make some improvements, and it will be worthy of a better rating.
Eh.. ok then mate.... what ever you want
-Justin
nice
better than your first one, keep it up man
Thank you my friend yeah i thought it was alot better then the 1st just wait till the 3rd!
-Justin :)
Pretty Average
Well, first off, I want to commend you guys for working on flash at such a young age. Most 13 year olds could only dream of making something like this. As for the flash, it wasn't bad. The animation was a bit choppy, and the graphics were rather simple, but clean enough. The major problem I saw was how the violence was animated. Getting stabbed by a knife would produce a much larger bloody mess. You should have animated a spurt of blood as he got stabbed, and put a little bit more blood afterwards. Also, try animating the stabbing motion a bit faster. It seemed like your character was just poking his enemies with the knife instead of jabbing it into them. Pretty good stuff nonetheless. You dudes have potential.
yeah its FBF so yeah some frames made it look jumpy yeah my mates give me like advice and help me along the way and yeah im glad you liked it...
yeah i dont care what people think of my age im 13 so what but i animate better then most people!
-Justin :) yeah the knife part.... was like pokey instead of a rough jab throught the back or something but in the 3rd im ganna spend alot more time... instead of just a week or 2...
thanks for the advice! :)
Not bad
very good, indeed but next time try more better graphics but if this was your 2nd flash I understand but it was good and check on my upcoming flash Star Wars Civil Wars.
Ps. jason AKA Anitclockman
man this isnt my 2nd flash man look at my profile i have like 9 in NG and i do alot more flash just for Freak_productions and i dont send to ng
yeah but the site is under construction so you can see it until version 2.0 of the site.... so yeah... well then see you like it so yeah thanks for voting!
-Justin :)
yeah and hope to see your start wars one soon!
Ill vote 5 if i see it!
great animation. can't fault it
hope to see the next installment soon. cant wait.
well done guys that was awsome.
Thank you mate!
-Justin :)