hm
great for ur first flash
Reviews for "Load of Bull"
SirPreacher responds:
thanks!
All i have to say is dude, no.
that wasnt funny, i think you tried too hard. i know i havent submitted anything to this particular site, but i now a thing or 2 about making flash movies, especially comedy. dont try to instantly come up with a lot of jokes and comedy, and DONT rip off other things unless its really funny. i give the they killed kenny moment most of the credit to the rating. but dont take it harshly, this is considered a generous rating for me.
SirPreacher responds:
Yeah, I am not the writter for this. I am just the would be artist behind it and a few random noises. My scripts I have come up with are alot more random and based of tangents.
Also I will not view this as harsh since you didn't say "oh this is shit" or some such. You atleast gave a reason for not liking it and you gave me some advice. Therefor it is all cool. The rating is what I expected to get on this as well. lol. But you must be a real hard ass on many things to have a 3 as generous for ppl's flash.
yeah...no
uhhh ok if its your first but if not...you need alot more practice...
SirPreacher responds:
Yeah I do. This is my first serious attempt. The other stuff I tried long ago, was more low grade than this. lol. Hopefully the project I will work on will come out much better than this.
it's a nice idea
the sound is good, I like those voices, it's humorous, it's violent. It's just not ready for newgrounds yet.....I gave it a score of 1
because those graphics still need a lot of work. (their mouthes are not moving while they speak, and the characters themselves could also use some graphic enhancement. and perhaps you could make them move around the screen a bit more... There wasn't enough 'real' action, just a bunch of guys standing around nearly motionless.
SirPreacher responds:
I have no clue how to lip sync. So I was not going to try and add it to this one since it was a project for a history class. Thanks for the helpful comments. I will keep that in mind when I work on the next flash I do.
Sucky shit
This was one of the worst animations iv seen in a long time
SirPreacher responds:
You could have just not said anything. Not really a helpful comment.