OK
Since this is your first submission, then I can clearly say its well done. The animation was good and fluent, the worst part were the graphics themselves and many of them got reused. This is definitally the departement you have to work on.
Overall the story was short, but not short on style. I give you a 7, but if you had better graphics than it could have very well been a 9.
ummmmm...
okay, this was kinda lame.... and th ending stunk...
try again...
AHHHHHHH my favorite style of flash
now add a good storyline and u get full marks, ima give this one a 4
Valla...
Valla, pero que buen trabajo, enserio vos felicito, no sabes que agradable es ver una que otra BUENA animacion proviniente de MEXICO o simplemente en ESPÑOL... me agradaria que una cancion, algo como greensleves o algo con lo que se pueda agarrar ese sentimiento, de olvido, persecucion, etc. animo y felicidades!
Really good FBF animation...
This was very well done. I have no complaints. 5/5