Lots of work has obviously gone into this!
Personaly the movie was to long for me but I noticed that you must have put lots of work into it and I think you have done a good job... It kinda rweminds me of zelda and lord of the rings combined (dnt ask y :S lol) but overall well done a good job!
Spelling Errors.
Curse and others were spelled wrong recheck your text and post it again. Oh and your story is based on a meth (Using the same names I mean) of very different nature.
Pretty Corny.
You need to work on your spelling and gramhar (I know I do to). But the intro was pretty dumb and did need to be deleted like you said, so I wasnt' counting that against you. The over all story was pretty cheezy though. And you need to work on the dialog because that was pretty cheezy also.
Some of the poses the guys would be in were pretty dorky looking also, and the animation needed work as well, and on top of this im not a fan of the anime style so that didn't help either.
Please no more 80's guitar rifts either, those are lame as well.
Well...
I guess the story was okay, but, it bored the hell out of me.
BORING!!!!!
Sorry for giving you a bad score but that was way to boring and I can not get into the story. So sorry better luke next time. Hopfully your next time you will captivate my attention.