You have...
The greatest sense of humor. Your flashes remind of Marc M.'s in the way that you start with a perfectly normal moment and then twist it into something kkkkkrazy. Also, I think that the little segment at the very end is hilarious. The way you look so down when you say 'He's a social monster...'. The animation on the 'Turkey' segment was a little choppy, at least, it seemed that way to me.
Anyways, I orgasm a five in your general direction.
Confusing mix of movies
There seem to be 2 movies here....which is OK, but they jump from one to the next with no word of explanation...call me old fashioned but would it kill you to have a title card before we are yanked from the cross dressing turkey-sympathiser's inner thoughts and thrust into the land of imps and lava? Honestly...you should have released these movies separately they are so wildly different in style and content. As far as content goes...well the humour was somewhat disjointed on the first one...nice lines about wearing women's undies but no reason, no consequence, no relevance to turkeys or thanksgiving = not that funny. Part 2 was much better...nice animation and a gently humorous punchline. Remember: story first...weak gags about cross-dressing second!
solid
the humor wasnt too hilarious, but had
its subtle touches; and for being two
animated shorts, it wasnt too shabby.
also the graphics of the 2nd were very
nice and were vibrant and colorful in
motion.
score: ***
MJ
Continuity
It's obvious you have some good flash skills, but I wanted to point out a few personal preference issues.
On the first short, there isn't much of a joke to justify the long monologue at the end. The beatnic turkey was funnier, so you should have ended with him.
On the second short, you had a much better sense of content. But there are some continuity issues when the blue guy falls into the crevice. After he falls we see lava falling down both sides and then he climbs up one side to get out. After he climbs out he ends up at the top of a crevice with lava just beginning to flow in.
Otherwise it was good.
Hehehehe.
It wasnt funny before the easter-egg at the end. and i am dissapointed cus its not what i wanted it to be.. but the gfx were great i guess
good work