WOOTZ! A REVIEW: GOODZ FLASH~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~111!!!
GRAPHICS:
Lacked detail: The outlines and animations were rigid and basic. The movie essentially seemed to be composed of blocks and circles-thats not creative of you, but it gets the job done. Give more complex lines and shadings to your drawings. Also, try to make the animations more fluid and natural. Have the characters walk humanly without resembling people with sticks up thier butts (^^ lolz).
I'm assuming you're using a mouse to draw-that must be tough. Though you probrably don't have an electronic pad for drawing, I've seen people work miracles with just thier mouse like the XIN series. Practice more with your mouse or find a better alternative for drawing.
STYLE:
Rectangular limbs and a circular head are horrible implementations of anime unless you wanted the SD look. Otherwise, reference some good anime tutorials for proportions, rules, and tips. Try howtodrawmanga[DOT]com and browse for tutorials.
SOUND:
I loved the voice acting!! It was crisp and matched its characters well! The storyline and dialouge was interesting (but WTF!-a dragon for an antagonist?! =p). Keep working hard!
VIOLENCE:
Not very graphic intensive and thrilling. The stiff animation took lots of the excitement from fight.
INTERACTIVITY:
Fun preloader. These should be a standard for movies.
HUMOR:
Wasn't laugh-out-loud funny in my opinion. Keep striving for quality dialouge. Though this wasn't an issue here, remember to use humor wisely so it'll not interfere with drama. It's a total mood killer.
OVERALL:
I tried to cover some of the prominent parts of your work for improvement and to provide some constructive crtiticism. Hopefully, you'll be aware of what I haven't covered. The flash basically (and obviously =p) suffered graphically. Improving your graphics will also help make your audiance more receptive to your plot and tone. Overall, the flash was mediocre (because the visuals screwed other aspects such as style and violence) but it was good crap and i'll be looking forward your future installments.
Forgive grammar and mispellings ^^; Follow-up Requested!