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Reviews for "My First Stick Movie"

Nice

Nice Flash, its just about the end, a bit weird eh?

Also, the height is a bit weird. Like the background stops before the top of the screen and half of thier bodies are chopped of too.

Yes I have Flash Player 8, maybe its a height problem?

Nice.

Tritone Angel said it all for me. Good flash otherwise, great if you added those things and maybe make it a big longer.

SacredElements responds:

^^ tnx

Good work - needs music, stop/replay function

A very, very good stick flash. An innovative use of sticks with the weird hairstyle for one of them, and the expressive eyes. Good scenes and solid animation.

The flash could benefit from some music however -- I would recommend some heavy metal/hard rock soundtrack in the background to liven it up a little. [Of course, I would recommend my own audio first, but that's up to you. :) ]

Also, the fact that the flash loops on its own could be regarded as a flaw. I would recommend making the flash play and terminate, with a replay button at the end for the user to choose to replay it or not.

Overall, a solid piece of work. I look forward to future (and hopefully longer) submissions from you.

SacredElements responds:

^^ tnx this was just something i done to pass time until i get my computer fixed, what can be easier than tweening symbols?
now i know it's not bad, i might work on a full stickman project.

I don't get it

Where is the story line in this? Why is he fighting that guy? Who was that in the clouds? Why did the dam thing restart the flash over again? You need a story line. Make it longer too. Overall not good

this was nice

I liked it. did you do it fbf or with some tween?
need work.
1. stop the loop.
2.play button.
3.some blood.
4.more time(less emportant)

overall it was enjoyable.