hmmm...
not your best at all, you needed more humouror violence, just something to make it stand out somehow
Reviews for "Shamoozal: Black Friday.."
Started well ended weak
Let's start with the good. Liked the fade in with the alarm clock and I loved how rolled all the way through the apartment and into the car. His brief rant on cheap shoppers was well founded and elicited a chuckle. After that....what happened!? It had so much potential but it just kinda died there. I would have loved to see some stuff that happened at work and maybe some customer jokes. Good start but it could be so much more.
BD
It could have been better...
I was hoping for him to get to work and be slammed against the door and wall as the store opened...Lol Anyways good idea could have been longer...
That was really good.
I worked at Wal-Mart during Black Friday.
Theres only one word to describe such a thing.
Hell.
Oh, and it's awesome to see people ripping their shirts off of eachother for a remote control hummer that will most likely break in 2 days.
Well that was ermm interesting?
Well that was nicely done. Don't really have much to say as it was quite short, but keep up the good work in any case.
Jame